Wordsmiths

Entries from April 2008

Tips and Tidbits

April 15, 2008 · 2 Comments

What a blessing a critique group can be! I can visit my monthly meeting with my fist full of rejection notices and my chin down to my knees and at the end of our time together I waltz away with my head up high. The members love to hear what new things I’ve written and are full of encouragement and helpful suggestions.

Before I joined the group I had published very few things, but with their expertise and shared publishing tips I have become more successful. In turn I enjoy encouraging others and sharing my own tips.

“Iron sharpeneth iron; so a man sharpeneth the countenance of his friend.” (Proverbs 27:1)

-contributed by Shirley Shibley

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Be a Star…and Shine!

April 14, 2008 · 4 Comments

Whether you’ve been reading our blog since its official launch last week or just stopped in today, it’s been so much fun to have you visit our new site and share in our little corner of the world. If you belong to a critique group, too, here’s how you can be a star member and shine!

Be encouraging. During your meeting, for each new manuscript, work hard to be sure that the first comments out of your mouth are positive ones. Instead of racing to be the first to point out a mistake, make it your goal to be the star encourager. Spend time encouraging the author first. Even the most simple words of encouragement can uplift a writer’s soul. Saying “Wow!” and “I like it,” and “I can tell you’ve really enjoyed working on this,” offer much needed validation in a rejection-oriented world.

Be diligent. Work hard to write down encouraging remarks. Every member gives up precious time to attend your meeting. When its their turn, don’t just listen to the manuscript and smile. Use your pen and write down at least two positive comments on every single page. Point out realistic dialogue. Circle and make a note of a great setting. Underline a well-worded passage. If you don’t know the technical terms for analyzing a passage, circle it and write, “Nice!” Draw a smiley face next to it. Be a star critique group member and write, “I like this!” or “This is great!” or “Good job!” or “Interesting!” When the writer returns home and reads your comments, his or her writer’s soul will be restored, refreshed, and renewed.

Be helpful. Don’t yet know how to offer constructive criticism that truly helps improve a manuscript? Be a star critique group member and make it your goal to become a better editor. First learn how to self-edit your own manuscripts with this helpful article by Renee Heiss, A Fiction Writer’s Checklist. Practice learning how to edit and polish your own manuscript so you can write helpful, constructive comments on every single page of each member’s manuscript when you meet to critique.

If you’re already a member of a critique group, don’t fall into the easy trap of lazy editing and discouraging remarks. Make it your goal to be a star critique group member and shine! Say encouraging remarks, write positive comments on every page, and learn how to give solid feedback to others.

Contributed by Nancy I. Sanders

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Cluck, Cluck! Critique Chicken

April 11, 2008 · 7 Comments

OK, I was a BIG chicken. Cluck, cluck!  Do chickens get knots in their stomachs—or craw?  Well, this one did the first time I showed up at the critique group I now belong to.

What was I afraid of? It certainly wasn’t the smiling faces that welcomed me—or the hugs and accepting attitudes of those seven beautiful people. It had everything to do with me.

I had been an isolated writer for so long. Now, I would have to put myself in the position of being vulnerable.  Sounds like I’ve never written a thing, huh? Nope.

By the grace of God I’ve had nine books published. Not a huge number, but not bad. Cluck, cluck!

I’ve written dozens of magazine pieces for kids, plays, health related articles for adults and human interest stories. It didn’t matter. Cluck, cluck, anyway.

It took courage and a stiff cup of coffee to pass that first manuscript around the table. WOW, am I thankful that I did! Now nothing but a broken down car and malaria could keep me from going. (Chickens do get malaria. Do they drive cars? Those two on a TV commercial do.)

Does this sound like you? Perhaps you’re a chicken too. Nine books. Ninety books. NO books. I doesn’t matter. As writers we’re always vulnerable when the words that come from our hearts are read by others.  I have found that to be a GOOD thing. The members of this wonderful group are anything but wolves wanting to gnaw on a chicken leg!

Here’s what our critique group means to me:

- It gives me the opportunity to know the wonderful riches within the hearts that are expressed on paper. What amazing talent!

- It teaches me in areas where I’m weak but someone else is strong.  I’m learning something every time.

- It allows me to see my manuscript with “fresh eyes” and new understanding. Our members are kind and not negative, yet they are truthful.

- It keeps me motivated to continue writing and rewriting until my manuscript is polished. I won’t give up till it shines!

- It keeps me from becoming discouraged when I get yet another rejection letter beginning with “Dear Writer.” Lots of love and understanding. Everyone has been there.

- It gives me a chance to share in the joy with a fellow
writer when a manuscript is accepted. We all know how tough it really is to have something published in today’s market.

Maybe my cluck, cluck! days are nearing an end. That doesn’t mean that little knot in my stomach won’t show up occasionally. But that’s OK.  Now I’m vulnerable in a GOOD way, and that will only make me a better writer. How about you? Are you ready to look for a critique group with these qualities?

Come out of that chicken coop. The wolves are gone.

Contributed by Sheryl Ann Crawford

Copyright 2008 Sheryl Ann Crawford

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A Funny Thing Happened at the Critique Group

April 10, 2008 · 5 Comments

Since I don’t drive on the freeway, I usually ride to the Montclair Plaza for our Wordsmiths meeting with my friend and co-member, Marilyn Donahue. However, Marilyn was on vacation at the time of our last meeting, so my husband Wayne, bless him, offered to drive me there and wait for me.

When we arrived, a couple of members who had met him before were there and said “Hi,” and Wayne chose to sit at a table on the other side of a small divider in the Food Court where we meet. Here he was happy to relax and read his Sports Illustrated. Other members arrived and the meeting began.

 Around 11:30, I noticed Wayne going to the pizza counter to get lunch. As he returned with this tray, I leaned back in my chair and called out, ”Hey, Good-Lookin.’ What did you get for lunch?”

Never were there such stunned looks on my fellow writers faces! Those who knew Wayne had forgotten he was there, and others had no idea who he was! To a person, they all wondered WHY I was “flirting” with this strange (yet handsome!) man. As one member put it, “This is a side of Marge we didn’t know about!”

Of course, I immediately explained who he was, and Wayne came to our table and chatted for a few minutes. We all had a good laugh.

Wordsmiths is always a terrific gathering, and we all look forward to it. But this time there certainly was an added note of fun and hilarity!

Contributed by Marjorie Flathers

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Featured Conference: Spring Writer’s Day

April 9, 2008 · 1 Comment

Meet Conference Leader Bonnie Compton Hanson!
E-mail: Bonnie Compton Hanson
Phone: 714-751-7824
Personal Web Site: Bonnie Compton Hanson
Conference Web Site: Orange County Christian Writers Fellowship

Bio:
Bonnie Compton Hanson is author of over 25 books for adults and children, including the seven-book Ponytail Girls series, plus hundreds of published articles, stories, and poems (including 25 for Chicken Soup for the Soul). Her new suspense novel for adults, Songs for a Mockingbird, is due out by June 1st. She also spent many years creating children’s curricula, crafts, music, and visual aids for several publishers, for both Christian and general markets. A former editor and missionary to Australia, she speaks to MOPS, seniors, schools, and women’s groups, leads writing seminars, mentors new writers, is a pastor’s wife, and adores her grandchildren and pets. She puts her M. of Ministry in Christian Communication to work as an adjunct instructor in Creative Writing at Concordia University.

Featured conference: Spring Writer’s Day
The Orange County Christian Writers Fellowship has been reaching out to our local Christian Writers for more than 30 years. Besides sponsoring local critique groups and a newsletter, we sponsor each spring a Spring Writer’s Day. This year’s conference will be April 12, 2008 at Mariner’s Church, 5001 Newport Coast Dr., Irvine, CA 92603. The Courtyard Irvine Inn offers reduced rates for conference attendees needing overnight lodging. Registration, breakfast, and book tables are open at 7:30 A.M. Signups for consultations with editors and noted authors begin at 8:00 A.M. The conference itself begins at 8:45 AM, continuing until about 4:30 PM, including lunch and afternoon break. Besides three keynote speakers–including Dan Benson, Editorial Director for NavPress—there will be 20 workshop sessions covering everything from screenwriting to devotionals to novels to creating “brands.” For more information, see www.occwf.org.

Interview:
Q: How did attending writers conferences change your life as a writer?
A: I’ve made contacts there with editors that resulted in the publication of some of my books and articles. Which of course is pretty neat! But that’s not the only benefit.

Conferences are also a great place to fellowship, network, worship, and learn the nuts and bolts of writing. That’s where I learned about query letters, proposals, one-sentence summaries, agents, and writing three chapters first for nonfiction books (not the entire books) until I have a contract for it. Plus the importance of sharing my writing with other writers for honest critiques.

Years ago I thought the important thing about writing was to be inspired; after that, the words would just flow, and my efforts would soon be published. Boy, was I off base! From conference speakers I gained a lot of understanding about the publishing industry, techniques, even sympathy for the editor who may want to publish my “masterpiece,” but is shot down by his own marketing committee. Editors are people, too, who want to do the best they can—especially Christian editors who both want to produce life-changing books, but not run into the red on costs vs. profits, thus endangering their company’s finances. They need our prayers, just as we should all pray for each other.

Q: What was your favorite all-time writing conference?
A: My favorite was probably one years ago at Biola University, when we had a week-long writers’ conference there. I was on the faculty, teaching a workshop on writing for Sunday School and church curricula. Few students signed up—but later I saw many of them develop a lively ministry in this area, which thrilled me. Much of our time at this conference was informal—and I got to fellowship with and question personally many editors and wise mentors. Although I was teaching, also, I learned even more from others.

Q: Share some of the diverse hats you wear as a conference leader.
A: Planning takes all year long, because many editors have a full schedule, booked months in advance. We have six on our planning Board, plus two advisors (I’m one of the advisors). By the time the actual conference day arrives, we will all have put in many hours on preparation work. I’ve been in charge of all phone calls inquiring about the conference. Besides leading one of the workshops myself (on Writing for Children), I’ll put in several hours consultation time there with attendees, plus help at the Book Table, and wherever else needed. I’ll probably also help at the last minute delivering cases of bottled water, extra toilet paper, and tablecloths (won’t be firmed up till next week). Also I help prepare the consultation schedules.

Q: If someone is already a published writer, what steps should he or she take to become a speaker at a writer’s conference?
A: If you’re very famous, don’t worry—they’ll find you. As for the rest of us, you probably won’t be invited to speak at a conference you’ve never attended or never even heard of. So start by looking up Christian writers’ conference in the back of your Sally Stuart’s Christian Writers’ Market Guide. Contact the leaders of those conferences that interest you, with an informative brochure about yourself and your ministry—containing recommendations from others, if possible. Or you can do your initial contact via e-mail.

A hint: you’ll more likely meet a need if you fill a unique slot (such as writing family memoirs or murder mysteries), but also can speak or teach on some of the most-wanted topics, such as getting started writing, writing novels, attention grabbing articles, writing nonfiction books with a ready readership, etc.

Q: Share one tip you’d like to give to someone attending a writing conference for the very first time.
A: Go with an open heart and mind. Don’t get pushy and try to intimidate an editor or argue with him or her. On the other hand, don’t just hide in the background. Relax, smile, listen, learn. Keep pen and paper handy. Know that you can contact these speakers later if you aren’t ready to show them something today. If you are working on a book or article and are excited about it, develop a one-sentence summary telling everyone who asks its genre, readership, and what’s unique about it. In other words, do a sales job! If possible, also develop a one-page summary of your book or article—including title, something about it, and why you are qualified to write it. Make several copies. If someone asks what you’re writing, you’ll have that one-pager ready. Network, smile, make friends. We’ll be praying for you—and looking for your book on the Best-Seller List!

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C is for Critique Group

April 8, 2008 · 2 Comments

Cheers for a job well done!
Really fun fellowship and friends
Ideas and inspiration
Timely market tips
Important feedback and constructive criticism
Questions asked. Answers provided.
Understanding ears and sympathetic hearts
Encouragement, enthusiasm, and energy!

Guidance and grace
Restoration, refreshment, and renewal
Opportunity for testing the waters
Uplifting prayers for God’s purposes
Polished to perfection and ready for publication!

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Welcome To Wordsmiths!

April 7, 2008 · 5 Comments

We are a group of eight Christian women who are serious about using our God-given gift of words to educate, inspire, and entertain children throughout the world.

Each week the members of this critique group will contribute posts meant to encourage, instruct, advise, and awaken you to be all that God has called you to be as a writer. Learn more about each one of us in Meet Our Members. Feel free to peruse the other pages for tips, editor’s needs, inspiration, and other great resources we would like to share with you.

Each month will have its own unique topic. This month we will focus on Critique Groups.

A critique group, for those unaware, is a group who gathers together on a regular basis to read over one another’s writing projects and offer helpful and constructive criticisms in a positive way. The purpose is to help develop the members into better writers and to learn how to effectively market what the members produce. In today’s day and age some groups meet online. In our group, we look forward to our monthly meetings where we can interact face to face with hugs, laughter, and an exchange of ideas.

I love our Wordsmiths group. The ladies are extremely loving and supportive. I always walk away feeling so blessed that God opened up such a wonderful group for me to belong to.

Come back often and check out our daily posts. Feel free to comment. If there is a topic you’d like us to discuss in the future, send us a note in the Contact Us section.

Thank you for visiting. Please come back again!

 

Contributed by Catherine L. Osornio

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